It's nice of you to pinpoint a section of my writing that you enjoyed, but I had hoped for some other specific criticisms in order to help me shape my next draft. Just sometimes people can see around my corners better than me, you know, and I didn't want to go into it blind. Also I feel kind of lonely putting it together, although that's my personal burden and no one else's.Since Jason is arriving tomorrow I intend to have my next draft done by then so it's a little late now. You're busy I know. I'll send you the second draft, which should be nearly the final draft, and the shot list tomorrow, if you want.
Going to email you a break down tonight. All over the place geographically -- apologies. Just wanted to put this up as a starter.
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